Five constructive ways to improve Doki Doki Precure & Kigurumikku

Okay, it’s time to try the final idea I had for weekend posts. Going into this, I couldn’t decide whether to do the list for something that I had given a high rating or something that I had given a low rating. Doing it for something good takes more work but the changes are also going to be less extreme. In the end, I decided to do one of each. For the good we’ve got Doki Doki Precure and for the bad we’ve got the series I reviewed this Wednesday, Kigurumikku V3.

A couple things to keep in mind. First, there are going to be spoilers. So be aware of that. Secondly these are things that I think would improve the series in question.  You may agree with my thoughts on it or you may think I’m off base or completely crazy. Which I’m not, I’m just eccentric. Either way, feel free to share your own ideas on the subject. Thirdly, these aren’t going to be in any particular order. With those details in mind, let’s begin with the bad series.

Kigurumikku V3: 

1. The fan-service. This series focuses far too much on bosoms and other feminine parts. Part of the problem is just that it’s in poor taste, especially given that most of the characters are really young. The other part of the problem is that it doesn’t really do anything from a comedic perspective. Women having bosoms isn’t funny. Women getting their clothes ripped and having their bosoms seen by strangers is also not funny. When you’ve got thirty minutes of content and you’re trying to be comedic you really can’t waste time on attempts at titillation.

2. The train scene. I didn’t really talk about this one specifically in my review, but there’s a scene where the older sister goes on the subway, gets groped by a pervert, rescued by one of the girls and told that she shouldn’t have dressed like that. First off, someone getting molested on a train isn’t funny. But what makes this scene particularly horrible is the whole victim blaming aspect. Not just because it’s bullshit, but because it’s been used on actual people who have suffered from terrible things being done to them. It would be one thing if this was a drama and they were actually using it to contribute to the conversation about victim blaming, but it’s a comedy and it’s not smart enough for that.

3. The performances. The series doesn’t have bad actresses. In fact, I think all of them have had roles in better light-hearted series. Koyama was in Gokujou Seitokai, which I’ll probably review at some point. Iguchi was in Girls und Panzer & Tomatsu was in Sakura Trick. The problem is that the direction in this series called for them to go loud and obnoxious. Subtle and dramatic performances wouldn’t have worked for what they were doing with the series, but there’s a happy middle ground between that and super exaggerated which they should have gone for.

4. The mascots. Yes, mascot characters are a part of most magical girl series. However, given how short this series is they really shouldn’t have had three mascot characters. You really only need one to make jokes about that particular trope.

5. The humour. They have a few genre jokes like having all the girls be instantly recognisable and actually having people recognise them unlike a lot of magical girl series where their identities should be obvious but no one seems to notice but most of them are more focused on the girls talking about boobs or the older sister getting stripped. Most of the jokes are rather tasteless perverted jokes. If they’d focused more on the parody aspect and less on that then they might just have made something funny.

Doki Doki Precure: 

1. The problem with carrots. Let’s talk about one of the bad episodes specifically. There’s an episode where we find out that Ai and Aguri hate carrots. Which you might not consider a big deal. Everyone has foods they don’t like so just let them eat some other vegetables. But no, this is played up as a big deal and they’re taken to a farm to learn about how much work brought those carrots to their plates. Which is bull crap since disliking one type of vegetable hardly constitutes being overly picky. In fact, that’s an easy way to fix it. Have the two of them be really unreasonable about not wanting to eat vegetables at all. Then you’ve got a situation where the other characters don’t come across as majorly over-reacting.

2. Aguri needs more development. When I reviewed this anime I talked about how Aguri is an under-developed character. This did not have to be the case. They could have taken time during those five weak episodes to focus more on her and develop her as a character beyond her liking sweets and scolding the other girls a lot.

3. Ai. The series actually does something interesting with Aguri and Regina being two parts of Princess Ange resulting from the selfish overtaking half her heart. Then it’s further revealed that Ai is a third aspect of Princess Ange and that’s why she needs to be there. Except that this plot element would be stronger without a third aspect. Not only that, but four of the five weak episodes focus on Ai and she’s just really annoying. As such, my solution would be to have Regina and Aguri as the split aspects of Princess Ange, give Cure Ace a regular non-ear splittingly obnoxious fairy to use for transforming and use those extra episodes for more character development.

4. The Fairy ticks. I know that it’s a staple of the precure franchise to give the mascot characters verbal ticks. However, I don’t think it’s a good element to them and I think the acting would have been stronger if the faeries had just spoken normally. At the very least they could have had some kind of different accent instead of saying parts of their names with every sentence.

5. Stock footage attacks. This is one that’s a staple for the genre and, again, the stock footage doesn’t look bad. I still think it would have benefited from taking more time to make the special attacks a more seamless part of combat and ignored the stock footage convention.

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